He puffed a cigarette and exhaled a circle of smoke hoping to see her on the other side with a pinched nose and her hand waving to break this smoky cloud.
He wanted to hear her say one last time, “Sweeto, I am telling you I will really dump you if you don’t quit smoking.”
But it was too late, she had quit him before he could quit smoking. She had quit this world and vanished into the smoke that rose from the dead.
Life may not give you a second chance. Be good and do good.
DO IT NOW.
Powerful story,
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Strong message expressed beautifully!!
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Have come across this before but the message is so empowering that it never gets banal!
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Thanks dear, this was first posted on my personal blog at http://www.aditirranade.wordpress.com
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This is what we call short,crisp and impactful.
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Oh thanks, this compliment means a lot to me bcz i normally just cant make an impact with short writeups. Practicing that currently.
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You will do great😊
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The smallest story, with a very powerful message, Dost. God bless you!
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Thank you Dost. I made sure it is 7 sentence
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